Story plot ; is it good enough ?

So, I had this idea for a story. Tell me, is it good ? Is it worth taking the time to write the story ?



Deep in the main land of the world called Symptonia there lies a kingdom grander then any other known. The Palace stretches far across the mountainous hilltop, providing white marble homes for the villagers and traveling merchants. The kingdom, Xentia, had always been peaceful under King Artemis's rule but after his death the pillars of government, that he spent his whole life constructing, crumbled. His two sons were left to pick up the pieces and what they found was a shock to everyone! It seemed the King had been secretly dealing money and weapons to a roaming rebellion that took over other kingdoms to keep his own safe and after his death the Counselors, who ran most of everything, cut off the support to them. This greatly angered the Rebellion who depended on the King鈥檚 money and turned against the Kingdom of Xentia. Worse yet, the youngest Prince, was willed to take the crown for the eldest showed no signs of proper behavior for the throne! This had never been heard of and stirred much commotion among the Kingdom. The Rebellion attacked a number of times trying to destroy the outer barrier of the Kingdom and each time the new young King fought along his elder brother with the military to defend his home and in the last battle was greatly injured in the arm and chest.



Now these brothers had been very close, before all chaos broke loose, but rivalry's are springing up now that their homeland is falling apart. After the Coronation of the youngest prince, the elder felt betrayed by their father and by his brother for taking the statues of King from him and turned to hate his kin. The youngest prince, befuddled with the role he was inadequately prepared for and now injured, was to over whelmed by the revolting villagers, the invading rebels, his attempt of trying to make up all the money his father stole form the treasury and pulling the kingdom out of the hell it fell in, to notice his brother's behavior. At least, he was at first. Now the young King has a new enemy to deal with; his own brother. Their best friend, a young lady in waiting, has stood by both for many years and her cheerful attitude seems to be the only thing keeping them together. Yet, as things become desperate, especially for the young king to take a queen and elder prince to take a wife to be a duchess (who they would choose from the ladies in waiting normally) and restore order in their Kingdom, the boys come to realize their true feelings of love for their friend. Bad thing is they both love her, neither will back down, and she鈥檚 completely clueless to their feelings. Not to mention she acts more like a boy then any of them and fights along side them in battle! Does the Kingdom of Xentia have a chance with it's own rulers in turmoil?



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Now for the other half of the story. The Rebellion. An odd name for rogues that scour the world Symptonia, taking over kingdoms and terrorizing villages. They really don't rebel against anything, except maybe themselves from time to time. Once long ago they came from a peaceful land of their own, ruled by a strong but benevolent King. The days were passed in peace and they were a strong ally to other countries but fate have it the King grew old and soon passed. Having no heir or Queen, the kingdom was left to a well-trusted adviser, that came from royal blood himself and he followed in the old King's traditions. However, the other advisers were tired of peace and being moderately rich. They wanted power, money and lands to rule. They out-right killed the new King and took the land by force, the Rebellion at the time had been the military, who were loyal to only the late King, and the new rulers knew they couldn鈥檛 be trusted. So the greedy old men banned the Rebels from their homeland and caused many sufferings.



Now this Rebellion raids the world, made up of soldiers, mercenaries and rogues they pick up along the way. At the moment they have their eyes set on Xentia, an old alley that abandoned them when the advisers took over but until now hadn't the power to raid such a large Kingdom. The Xentia King was even using the money and weapons trade to gain friendship back with the Rebellion, but when the advisers of Xentia took that away, it was the last straw. Yet, the Rebellion did not know that Xentia was having it鈥檚 own troubles at the time when the rebels were banished, (this was long before the Princes and the death of their King) and was unable to help them and the mishap has yet to be cleared. The Rebellion felt betrayed and now target the land of Xentia for their own, having a fearless young Leader who fought along side them has made the Rebels confident as ever. This young Leader took over his Father's position to run the Rebellion after the man died and has his sights set on the throne of Xentia, the most powerful Kingdom in Symptonia. To make matters worse he was the one whoStory plot ; is it good enough ?
Your question was so long that I only read the first half, but I think it sounds really good! I would read it. I think it's definitely worth writing. It's not just a simple plot; it has a bunch of smaller plots thrown in, and I really like that in a book. I definitely think it's good enough!Story plot ; is it good enough ?
the rebellion leader:

he was the one who...........

what?

i think it got cut off







but great story