Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Could somebody please critique my resume? I have been told it is to wordy...?

Summary



Results-oriented Production Clerk with a proven track record in Document Management services within or between departments. Verify customer and order information for correctness, checking it against previously obtained information as necessary. Successfully managed internal relationships ensuring work processes were completed on time, to a high standard and in compliance with strict specifications. Communicate with customers, employees, and other individuals to answer questions, disseminate or explain information, take orders, and address complaints. Proficient in entering, storing, and retrieving information on computer-aided equipment. Maintained, replenished and repaired materials and supplies key to business processes.





Professional Experience



Colorado Springs Legal Copy, Colorado Springs, CO

Production Clerk (2003-Current)

Read job orders to determine the type of work to be done, the quantities to be produced, and the materials needed. Monitor machine operation, and make adjustments as necessary to ensure proper operation. Operate auxiliary machines such as collators, pad and tablet making machines, staplers, and paper punching, folding, cutting, and perforating machines. Contact suppliers to verify shipment details. Maintain files such as maintenance records and bills of lading.

鈥?Enhanced ability to discern workload priorities and manage multiple projects with changing needs while acting as the liaison between client and company headquarters.

鈥?Effectively planned and implemented efficient means for production in a timely work flow while ensuring the security of sensitive document information.

鈥?Developed profitable relationships with suppliers, internal and external staff and management resulting in increased production of 25 percent.



Rocky Mountain High Wheels, Colorado Springs, CO

Sales Associate/ Bicycle Technician (2005-2006)

Recommend and provide advice on a wide variety of products and services. Compute charges for merchandise or services and receive payments. Prepare merchandise for display. Assemble new bicycles. Receive, examine, and tag articles to be repaired,cleaned and stored Install and adjust speed and gear mechanisms. Repair and replace equipment or accessories, such as handlebars,lights, and seats. Align wheels, replace tires and tubes, Disassemble axles in order to repair, adjust, and replace defective parts, using hand tools.

鈥?Developed efficient means of active listening to provide excellent customer service and ensure customer satisfaction.

鈥?Maintained working independently with minimal supervision or as a cooperative team member.

鈥?Mechanically inclined; ability to work well with tools.



Penney J C CO Inc - Department Store the Citadel-South, Catalog Telephone Shopping, Colorado Springs, CO

Credit Associate (2003-2003)

Answer telephones to provide information and receive orders. Keep records of customers' charges and payments. Evaluate customers' computerized credit records and payment histories to decide whether to approve new credit, based on predetermined standards. Receive charge slips or credit applications by mail, or receive information from salespeople or merchants by telephone.

鈥?Ensured the security of sensitive customer information while handling all internal and external calls.

鈥?Assisted sales associates, via multiple phone lines, in helping customers鈥?access sensitive credit information while researching and resolving customer complaints



Computer Skills

Windows, Macintosh, MS Word, MS Excel, MS Outlook, IBM AS 400, Adobe Photoshop, Adobe InDesign, Adobe PageMaker, Internet, E-mail, keyboarding, indexing, ten-key.

Could somebody please critique my resume? I have been told it is to wordy...?
i agree. way too wordy. People will give up reading it.../Could somebody please critique my resume? I have been told it is to wordy...?
Most interviewers give your resume 60 seconds...is your to the point enough that in 60 seconds they will want to know more. Don't forget the resume is an introduction, the interview is where you really get the oppurtunity to sell yourself!



I will tell you what...email your resume w/ format too me...and when I am bored this evening I will work on it! I did had HR help me with mine and have used it as an example to follow. I have done mine and my sisters and they have been sucessful. Format is half the fun. IF the above is your format then it will need some work. Do you have an email that I can send it to when I make it nice and less wordy?



melinda_hatch@yahoo.com



Let me know when you get this so I can edit my email out to avoid spam!



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